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Some people believe that no one should do the same job for all their working life. Others argue that doing the same job brings advantages for individuals, companies, and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today’s modern society, some
people
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 choose to do one
job
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 for their working
life
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 but others want to do different
jobs
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.
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 doing different
jobs
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 may have certain benefits, I personally believe that doing one
job
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 is a better way for individuals,
companies
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and companies
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. and society. On the one hand, there are some reasons to change different occupations in one’s
life
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. The first reason is that
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 can get employees to find their favourite
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.
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 means that when
workers
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 try some occupations, they will know what they want and can follow the correct career path. The second reason for
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 is that
workers
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 can get more experience, acquire a lot of skills and have the opportunity to discover themselves.
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, a worker who previously worked as an accountant can use their knowledge and experience in finance to run their own business.
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, it is my firm belief that
workers
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 should do the same
job
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 all their lives.
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 with, when
people
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 who graduate from university focus on their major, they can develop their essential skills.
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, after a long time of improving in a major occupation,
workers
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 may become more professional and get higher positions in their careers.
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, in Vietnam, senior positions often require employees to stay with the company for many years.
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, another reason is that when working in a
job
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 for a long time,
people
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 can have a more stable income.
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 will help them have a stable
life
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 with a higher standard of living. In conclusion, choosing the same
job
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 or different
jobs
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 will depend on employees ' decisions and both have their advantages.
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, I am firmly convinced that
people
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 should do the same
job
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 for all their working
life
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.
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