The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrastes
about five Correct your spelling
illustrates
Australia
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Australian
cities
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cities'
residets
drinking habits in three different Correct your spelling
residents
way
in Fix the agreement mistake
ways
last
four weeks.
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them Change preposition
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were went
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were going
coffee
or tea, all over 55% in four city
, Sydney,Change to a plural noun
cities
Melboume
, Brisbane and Hobart . Correct your spelling
Melbourne
whereas
Adelaide citizen who went out for dinrk
,49% ,was almost as popular as Correct your spelling
dinner
who
bought instant Correct pronoun usage
those who
coffee
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being the
most
favourite one.
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apply
On the other hand
, the second common type of drinking habits
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habit
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bought
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buying
coffee
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the last
one
month. Sydney 45%, Melboume47%, Brisbane 52% and Hobart 54% respectively.Correct pronoun usage
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By contrast
,the least favourite was bought fresh coffee
in all citiy
, all below 49%.
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city
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among
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Australian
citizen
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citizens
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cafe
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a cafe
the cafe
coffee
or tea was their major habit .And the following choice was bought
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to buy
coffee
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, both Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
of
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apply
two
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the two
choice
were close. The least Change to a plural noun
choices
favourtie
one was Correct your spelling
favourite
bought
fresh Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
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