The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrastes

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illustrates

about five

Australia

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Australian

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cities

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cities'

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residets

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residents

drinking habits in three different

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ways

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last

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four weeks. As is shown, in the bar chart, the most popular choice

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them

were went

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to a cafe for

coffee

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or tea, all over 55% in four

city

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, Sydney,

Melboume

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Melbourne

, Brisbane and Hobart .

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Adelaide citizen who went out for

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dinner

,49% ,was almost as popular as

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bought instant

coffee

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,with 50%,

the

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most

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apply

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favourite one.

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, the second common type of drinking

habits

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habit

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apply

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was

bought

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buying

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instant

coffee

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last

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month. Sydney 45%, Melboume47%, Brisbane 52% and Hobart 54% respectively.

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,the least favourite was bought fresh

coffee

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in all

citiy

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city

cities

, all below 49%.

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, in

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last

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4 weeks

for

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five

Australia

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Australian

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citizen

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citizens

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went

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going

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cafe

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a cafe

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for

coffee

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or tea was their major habit .And the following choice was

bought

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to buy

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instant

coffee

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, except for Adelaide

citizen

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citizens

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, both

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two

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choice

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choices

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were close. The least

favourtie

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favourite

one was

bought

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buying

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fresh

coffee

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

165 words

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In same cities, governments have tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they impose tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?