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Becasue many children are not able to learm foreign languages,schools should not force to learn foreign language.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the present world, people love to travel. It won't be wrong if I say that most people would either want to settle in a different nation or travel to different countries. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss how a
language
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 constraint could cause difficulties in achieving these dreams and whether
schools
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 should or should not force
children
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 into learning a foreign
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.
Firstly
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, I would like to talk about nations that have
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 as a second
language
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. For
children
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 in these nations,
English
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 is a foreign
language
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 and as
English
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 is a common international
language
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, in my opinion, all
schools
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 should force
children
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 into learning it.
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 would open great opportunities for the
children
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 both career-wise and travel-wise. Knowing an internationally recognised
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 would allow the
children
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 to settle in most of the developed nations. It would open new career paths for the
children
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, as they could pursue careers that might not have good enough opportunities in their home country. It would
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 help them in travelling, as we all know how tourists can be duped in foreign counties
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 them not being able to speak a common
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. Now I would like to talk about
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 that are specific to certain countries. In my opinion,
children
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 should not be forced in school to learn any
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languages
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 because it is too early for the
children
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 to decide whether they would need a particular
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 skill in their life or not.
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, teaching French to all the
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 in
schools
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 is pointless if the majority of them do not visit a French-speaking country. I think
this
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 should be a personal decision. Colleges are better institutions to learn
such
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 foreign
languages
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. I think colleges and universities should have the resources to help students learn a foreign
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 if a student decides to learn it. I would like
to conclude
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 my essay by saying that if
English
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 is a foreign
language
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 in a country, it should be taught forcibly in
schools
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, but other than that all other foreign
languages
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 should not be enforced in
schools
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 and should be a personal choice.
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