The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture illustrates the process of
electricity
production by geothermal energy. Looking at the Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Linking Words
this
production process involves several steps beginning with cold Linking Words
water
being put into a thick pipe under the ground, followed by the Use synonyms
water
going through a geothermal zone, and ,Use synonyms
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finally
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,finally
electricity
is transported to a power line tower from a generator.
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Firstly
, cold Linking Words
water
in a container is put into a 4.5km pipe in length, and it reaches the injection well made underground by flowing through the long pipe. Use synonyms
Then
, the cold Linking Words
water
goes through the geothermal zone which is Use synonyms
also
called hot rocks. After going through Linking Words
this
stage, the cold Linking Words
water
changes into hot Use synonyms
water
, and the hot Use synonyms
water
is pumped up by the production well, and Use synonyms
then
it is sent to a condenser, where the hot Linking Words
water
is made into steam. Use synonyms
Next,
the steam supplies power to a turbine, and the powered turbine activates a generator that Linking Words
finally
produces Linking Words
electricity
. In the final step, the Use synonyms
electricity
made by the generator is delivered to consumers going through a power line tower.Use synonyms
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