The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture illustrates the process of
electricity
production by geothermal energy. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that
this
production process involves several steps beginning with cold
water
being put into a thick pipe under the ground, followed by the
water
going through a geothermal zone, and ,
finally
Add a comma
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electricity
is transported to a power line tower from a generator.
Firstly
, cold
water
in a container is put into a 4.5km pipe in length, and it reaches the injection well made underground by flowing through the long pipe.
Then
, the cold
water
goes through the geothermal zone which is
also
called hot rocks. After going through
this
stage, the cold
water
changes into hot
water
, and the hot
water
is pumped up by the production well, and
then
it is sent to a condenser, where the hot
water
is made into steam.
Next,
the steam supplies power to a turbine, and the powered turbine activates a generator that
finally
produces
electricity
. In the final step, the
electricity
made by the generator is delivered to consumers going through a power line tower.
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