The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture illustrates the process of
electricity
production by geothermal energy. Looking at the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that this
production process involves several steps beginning with cold water
being put into a thick pipe under the ground, followed by the water
going through a geothermal zone, and ,finally
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,finally
electricity
is transported to a power line tower from a generator.
Firstly
, cold water
in a container is put into a 4.5km pipe in length, and it reaches the injection well made underground by flowing through the long pipe. Then
, the cold water
goes through the geothermal zone which is also
called hot rocks. After going through this
stage, the cold water
changes into hot water
, and the hot water
is pumped up by the production well, and then
it is sent to a condenser, where the hot water
is made into steam. Next,
the steam supplies power to a turbine, and the powered turbine activates a generator that finally
produces electricity
. In the final step, the electricity
made by the generator is delivered to consumers going through a power line tower.Submitted by doseun on
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