Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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and computer

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violence

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content are the most favoured

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, my people,

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my

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people these days. Many

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that these

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should be prohibited ,

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others disagree.

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essay will try to elaborate

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argument

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and give

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point of view First and foremost, there are many kinds of popular

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and online

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that have

violence

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content these days, even superhero

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.

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, Iron Man, Spiderman, or Free Fire online

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, all of these contains many disturbing scenes. Scenes when the hero fights against the villain

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for

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many physical actions, that hurt each other, and if the kids see that, they will think

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the right way to protect people,

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it is not. There are many other ways, that can be done and not use violence.

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, the scenes are

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full of blood or other injuries, which can make the kids feel traumatic.

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, both action

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and

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have a good story behind

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. It can teach many

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moral

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value

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values

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to our kids,

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, that we must fight for the weak, and learn to protect ourselves in the future. These values

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become the main point for others, that they

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these kind

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of

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or

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, only for fun and stress relieving.

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watching the

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part of the movie, they will feel the adrenaline

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and the emotion.

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, they feel that

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watching

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this

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this movie

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or playing online

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, can help them to release

stree

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stress

from work, and some activities to do in their leisure time. In conclusion,

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so many

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and

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that

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provides many disturbing

scene

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, they are just for fun, and not

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real action that can be applied in our life.

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why,

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writer

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writers

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disagree

if

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that

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those

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and

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prohibited

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are prohibited

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from

the

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society.