In some countries around the world, men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

In some parts of the world, many have
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old
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positive
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and negative
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this
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. Nowadays, many people pursue
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financialy
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financially
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, and they start a family later on
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after
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financially free. As the result, many become
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parents
in
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old
age
.
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one
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side, the
babies
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while
the
parents
already prepared
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for their
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can have as much as they want, and
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good quality.
Parents
can easily afford the
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need
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because they
already
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prepared for the money that
needed
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.
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, the family may already have a good place to
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and better
health
care.
Parents
can
also
provide the best education for their
kids
, because of the
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budget
preparation.
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may lead the
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more success in the future.
Moreover
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parent
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parents
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that prepared mentally to have
babies
, will have
a
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better mental
health
rather than the one that not prepared at all.
On the other hand
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a baby
in
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later
age
, may harm the
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life. Because, as we
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, our
health
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not as prime as we were young. So the whole process from
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to giving birth must under
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of the healthcare.
Furthermore
, many
age
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between the parent and kid may lead to different
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and
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. The
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parents
also
have a chance to not see their
kids
grow up, because of their
health
. In conclusion, it is a good way to
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financially to have
a
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a baby
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babies
, but
a
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parents
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parents
to be, must
also
pay attention to their
health
condition, to prevent any
health
issue
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in the future.
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