You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing in regard to the article about Buenos Aires that you posted in the

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issue. My name is Nicolas Arratta and I am originally from that city. The main reason for my letter is informing to you that the information that you gave about my town is not accurate, basically because you said that Buenos Aires is near the mountains and the nearest one is about 600km away. I probably do not know anything about writing or producing a magazine but one thing I know for sure is that those types of sources should give the reader reliable information. I can not imagine people coming from all over the globe trying to find something similar to a mountain in my town and finding nothing similar but that. What I suggest you do is make a new article about what are the things that you are able to find in my town,

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as beaches or great outdoor areas but mountains. I would appreciate it if you create a new article explaining the big mistake you made. I hope you can understand my discomfort, Yours faithfully, Nicolas Arratta

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

201 words

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