The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
table depicts the proportions of journeys
which
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apply
made
by various sorts of Add a missing verb
are made
transportations
in four nations.It Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
clear
from the table that using cars is the highest Add a missing verb
is clear
rates
in all countries.
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rate
According to
what is shown,the percentages of journeys
which
made by car in Canada,BelgiumCorrect pronoun usage
apply
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, as well as Germany,
as well as
Germany were 90%,72%and 68% respectively.Meanwhile,the ratio of on foot
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on-foot
also
bicycle journeys
maintained stable
in Belgium and Germany.
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stably
In addition
,considering the bar chart the figures of
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for
alternative
were Fix the agreement mistake
alternatives
the
highest level in the graph accounting Change preposition
at the
just
below 40 reasons.Change preposition
for just
While
,
a few Remove the comma
apply
number
of work nightshift reasons for people who travel by car constituting slight below 10 reasons.
Change to a plural noun
numbers
To sum up
,we could say that most of
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apply
journeys
were made by the use of cars in all nations.Add an article
the journeys
However
,the highest rate was in Canada.Submitted by 19-0415 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words journeys with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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