You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................., you have 20 minutes to complete the task

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Dear Ms Budal, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing in regard to the

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concert you gave in Dublin. I was there with my family and let me tell you that you were incredible! I went to many live concerts in my young life but nothing compared to

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. You are an amazing show-woman who knows how to deal with a huge crowd and you did it more than well. I

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like to tell you that I am currently studying at one of the most recognizable academies in my town following my big dream of having a career in an industry of music like yours. Since I first saw you perform on a stage many years ago, I discovered in me something that I wanted to feel proud of and for that, thanks to you, I decided to follow my dreams despite everyone's opinion around me.

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and I know that could be too much for me to ask, I would like to invite you if you would be able to come and see me play at my next concert at school. It would mean everything to me know if you could be part of the audience seeing me playing that night.

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, knowing that you could be there is pushing me to give my best self for that night. I hope you can make it and thank you again for your art. Kinds regards, Nicolas Arratta

nicoarrattaWed Feb 08 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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245 words

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