Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music
is one of the most enjoyed
form
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of
an
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art. Some
people
believe that songs can help with
an
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integration of different cultures and ages. In
this
essay, I will argue that
music
as a universal language connects
people
from various parts of the world and
further
given the natural appeal of
music
it can bring together persons of different ages.
Music
is a
cross language
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entertainment. Even though
that
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lyrics of songs are of a particular language, it is not crucial to
understant
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understand
it
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them
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to enjoy
it
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them
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.
For example
, the song Gangnam Style
from
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a Korean artist had success all around the world and almost everyone knew it and could dance to it, despite a majority of listeners did not know what was it about. The global trend of
this
melody and
rythem
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rhythm
helped with linking
people
from various parts of the world and showed that no matter the culture we are all able to enjoy and dance to the same song. Different situations
requires
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specific songs. It is common that young and old
people
have
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significantly different
music
tastes.
However
, I would argue that in some situations personal preferences step aside and everyone
enjoy
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the same
music
.
For instance
, in the later hours of
wedding
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the wedding
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party,
where
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when
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all generations are usually present, it is normal to find kids enjoying
music
with their grandparents. The
music
usually set a nice atmosphere that allows
people
to share positive emotions among themselves. In conclusion,
music
is understood by everyone and produces good vibes. Which can lead to a connection of
people
from various countries and
also
of different ages. I am firmly convinced that
this
is a positive thing that contributes to a happier society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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