The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

An online store is an e-commerce website or app where buyers can see a catalogue of
products
or services and electronically purchase them. We cannot overlook how these
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are
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fast growing these days. ,
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saying the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all
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in towns and cities closing is a bit overboard.
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who
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up in
stores
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additional items. Going into a stock gives the
customer
an opportunity to see a variety of items, which they can choose from,
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is not the case with online shopping because they are only exposed to a selected few.
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are more likely to buy
products
they have seen in person, the main reason
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prefer to shop in the physical shop is to experience,see, and test
products
in person before buying. A physical location can dispel doubts and help close the sale.
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,
this
can reduce the chance of a product being returned for size or
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.
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personalized
customer
service increases sales.
While
e-commerce is popular, human interaction is still important. Shoppers are likely to spend more after getting high-quality service in
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stock. Physical
stores
can reduce the cost of returns. It costs more when
customer
exchange or return purchases bought online than at physical
stores
because it removes shipping and transportation fees. More so , physical
stores
give their customers an opportunity to bargain on prices of
products
an opportunity which is not available with online shopping.
However
, online
stores
are convenient, you can sit
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the comfort of your home or office to shop, online payments are quite flexible and customers avoid moving around with huge sums of money. Online shopping is
also
time-saving. Physical
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are not closing up completely irrespective of how fast online shopping is growing. Online department
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need
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physical
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to survive because we do not stock goods or services on a web page. I do not agree that online shopping will one day lead to all
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in towns and cities closing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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