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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to express my disappointment with your restaurant. Yesterday, I visited your restaurant with my family to celebrate my birthday. we usually visit restaurants that have good ratings.
Therefore
, we decided to come here as it has good reviews and is nearer to my place. We ordered the most popular dish on the menu. At the time of order, when asked about the ingredients of the dish to the waiter, he did not give a satisfactory reply and made fun of us
instead
. I believe it is not appropriate behaviour.
Also
, It took a lot of time to prepare the dish. At the time of service, he
spilt
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 the food on my mother and did not even apologize. We are not very happy with all
this
 inappropriate behaviour. I want you to take strict action against him and provide some training on customer interaction.
Apart from
this
, I would like you to give some discount for the next visit. Thank you, Neel Patel
Submitted by Neel Patel on

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