The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
The Pie Charts illustrate the amount of using various natural resources in terms of
power
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production
in a particular country in two different years.
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Overall
, the uses of various sources had Linking Words
been
changed significantly from 1985 to 2003, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
the dependency on Linking Words
oil
was a bit replaced by others. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, a notable drop was observed in the sector of using nuclear Linking Words
power
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in
the beginning of Change the preposition
at
21st
century.
To start with, in the middle of Correct article usage
the 21st
80s
, the two main Correct article usage
the 80s
contributes
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contributors
in
the sector of energy Change preposition
to
production
were Use synonyms
oil
and nuclear. Use synonyms
Whereas
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oil
accumulated 52% of total Use synonyms
production
, nuclear resources contributed 22%. Use synonyms
Apart from
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this
, the third biggest Linking Words
sources
was coal with 13% Fix the agreement mistake
source
conteibution
and natural gases and water were usedCorrect your spelling
contribution
8
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at 8
an
4 Correct your spelling
and
percent
respectively.
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per cent
In contrast
, in 2003, Linking Words
a
significant increases were noted in the proportion of using fusile fuel like coal and gases and that year they contributed 45% together. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Also
, the dependency on other natural raw materials was augmentedLinking Words
3
% over 18 years. Change preposition
by 3
However
, the only item that remained Linking Words
same
was the Correct article usage
the same
hydro
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hydropower
power
with 4%of the sum.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
although
Linking Words
oil
was the prime source of Use synonyms
power
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production
in these years, several changes were noted in the way of manufacturing energy.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, production, oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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