People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the 20th century, commuting is

one

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of the crucial aspects of the development of the

city

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. A long

time

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ago

people

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usually worked nearby their house, right now,

place

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of

worked

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is tending to be concentrated in the

center

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of the

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.

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from supporting areas or

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others

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in

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the edge of

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city

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the city

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transporting

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daily to their place of

worked

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work

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. If a

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does not possess good infrastructure for commuting many

minor

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minors

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until

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and

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major problems could

occured

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occurred

occur

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, infrastructure to

makes

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commuting more efficient is necessary for the

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.

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of the

idea

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to solve

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problem is by creating

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the plenty

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amount of

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apartments

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in the

central

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of

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city

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the city

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,

a

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bunch of

people

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who usually have a long

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spent

in

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apply

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travelling to work could be reduced. They argue if

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happen

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the productivity of the labour in the

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could be increased dramatically. On the other side, the

problems

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for

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with

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suggestion is the building in the

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of

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city

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is already have

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high density and

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should

sacrificed

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some buildings for creating an apartment.

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of the

most

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apply

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loud

suggestion

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suggestions

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is to sacrifice

parks

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and

gardens

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close to the

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center

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centre

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for apartments.

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movement has many flaws because

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and

parks

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have important roles

for

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in

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a

city

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.

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,

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and

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could be

a modes

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a mode

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to

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people

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in the

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to

doing

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exercise and breath fresh air.

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, some

gardens

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and

parks

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also

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play

role

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a role

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as drainage to a

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. By removing those

building

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buildings

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, flood and health issues in the

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definitely will be inflated. In conclusion,

although

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by removing

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and

gardens

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close to the

city

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center

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centre

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with buildings

apartments

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and apartments

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for commuters could escalate

the

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apply

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labor

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labour

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productivity. The side effects of doing

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is

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are

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severe for a

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because

of

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apply

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parks

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and

gardens

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play

crucial

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role as well. To reduce the

time

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spent

in

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apply

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travelling to work the author suggest

a

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apply

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for

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the government rather than removing the

gardens

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and

parks

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for

apartment

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an apartment

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,

we

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apply

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should

enhanced

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the speed of our public transportation.

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of the most feasible things to do is upgrade our train speed which right now only

have

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has

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100 km/h speed to the bullet train that

have

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400km/h speed. By doing that, we can cut down the

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spent of doing commuting without removing the

gardens

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and

parks

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on

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in

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the

city

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.