modern scientist need specialist in certain fields not in others. some people think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
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students
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impact
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society
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policy suggestion.
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are
of
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students
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apply
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a negative impact Change the verb form
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the
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society
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apply
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market, their skillset would be insufficient and it will Change the spelling
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inflated
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students
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more relevant Change preposition
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subjects
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in
labor
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subjects
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students
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the
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society
needs. Because of that, the graduated Change noun form
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students
in relevant subjects
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society
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neglected
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considered
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relevant Correct article usage
the least
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has
is still have
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society
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different proportions. The things Correct the article-noun agreement
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case, the author suggest
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suggests
instead
of removing the funds for less
relevant subject, the government should just reallocate the proportion of funding that more leaned to the Add an article
a less
subjects
that society
more needed.Submitted by muhamadhaikal128 on
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