The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the relative
percentage
contributions made by the agricultural, industrial and service sectors to the Indian economy between 1960 and 2000. Over the whole time period, the significance of agriculture declined steadily
while
services grew in importance decade by decade. A different
patterned
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emerged for industry, which
initially
showed a slowly increasing
percentage
but
then
plateaued from 1980 onwards. In 1960, agriculture contributed by far the highest
percentage
of GDP, peaking at 62%, but it
then
dropped in steady increments to a low of 12% in 2000. The service sector,
on the other hand
, had a relatively minor impact on the economy in 1960.
This
situation changed gradually at
first,
then
its
percentage
contribution jumped from 28% to 43% between 1980 and 1990. By 2000 it matched the high point reached by agriculture in 1960, showing a reversal in the
overall
trend. Industry remained a steady contributor to India’s wealth throughout the period. As a sector, it grew marginally from 16% in 1960 to exactly a quarter in 1980
then
remained static for the next two decades, maintaining a constant share of the
overall
GDP.
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