Some people believe that zoos are cruel so that they should be closed. However, some people hold the belief that these place are actually in terms of animal protection. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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know the zoo topic is very delicate; in ,

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fact we have been given through the years some examples of facilities where

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are treated as objects, barely fed, kept in small cages with no free space or even killed despite doing nothing, as they did with Harambe. On the other ,hand there are other structures that are known for being very respectful of the animal itself as the Wien or the Manhattan zoo, where you can see how good

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are treated and how much zookeepers care about them; these places are

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very important for the endangered species like pandas or exotic

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that are vanishing from their natural habitats because of humans destroying forests or killing them for their high-value hairs. In the

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end I think it depends on what every single zoo wants to do with

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, if they only care about visitors without keeping an eye on the wellness of the creature, in my opinion, they should be shut down and transformed into shelters for endangered species.