The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarise it.
The given line chart illustrates the expenditure of
business
, holiday and visiting friends
or relatives
travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
day
by day
in one country between 1997 and 2017.
Overall
, we can see that spending by international visitors was the highest between the years 2000 and 2003. While
business
travellers spent the most at the beginning of the period, people
visiting friends
or relatives
spent the least.
In 1997, people
who traveled
for Change the spelling
travelled
business
to New Zealand spent an average of 260$ per day
, while
holidaymakers spent only around 190$ and people
visiting friends
or relatives
spent less than 120 dollars. Over the following five years, the amount of spending for all three categories rose significantly, reaching a peak of 330$, 270$ and almost 220$ respectively. However
, their expenditure suddenly fell back again between 2003 and 2005
From 2005 and 2015, the daily spending of business
travelers
and tourists fluctuated around 200$, Change the spelling
travellers
whereas
people
visiting relatives
and friends
spent approximately 60 to 80$ less per day
. By 2017, daily expenditure had increased again to around 250$, 210$ and 140$ respectively for vacationers, business
people
and those who visited their loved ones.Submitted by cice
on
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