The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.

The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice

consumed per person per year in different countries.
These tables depict the annual
consumption
per person of both
beer
and
fruit
juice
in different
countries
. It is clear from the table that Ireland and Canada have the highest annual
consumption
of
beer
and
fruit
juice
respectively.
According to
what is shown, Ireland and Germany have the highest annual
consumption
of
beer
of
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155 and 119
liters
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respectively.
Although
Austria comes next in order of
beer
utilization, the other
countries
consume an average of 90
liters
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annually with Finland
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the least at 79
liters
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.
Fruit
juice
,
on the other hand
, Canada and the United States account for
a
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significant annual
consumption
of 52.6 and 42.8
liters
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respectively,
while
Netherland
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and New Zealand consume the least; hovering around 28 and 24
liters
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respectively. The other
countries
have nearly the same
consumption
rate per year of the same beverage.
To sum up
, we could say that the
countries
consume higher quantities of
beer
than
fruit
juice
annually.
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