The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.
These tables depict the annual
consumption
per person of both beer
and fruit
juice
in different countries
. It is clear from the table that Ireland and Canada have the highest annual consumption
of beer
and fruit
juice
respectively.
According to
what is shown, Ireland and Germany have the highest annual consumption
of beer
of
155 and 119 Change preposition
apply
liters
respectively. Change the spelling
litres
Although
Austria comes next in order of beer
utilization, the other countries
consume an average of 90 liters
annually with Finland Change the spelling
litres
consumes
the least at 79 Wrong verb form
consuming
liters
.
Change the spelling
litres
Fruit
juice
, on the other hand
, Canada and the United States account for a
significant annual Remove the article
apply
consumption
of 52.6 and 42.8 liters
respectively, Change the spelling
litres
while
Netherland
and New Zealand consume the least; hovering around 28 and 24 Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
liters
respectively. The other Change the spelling
litres
countries
have nearly the same consumption
rate per year of the same beverage.
To sum up
, we could say that the countries
consume higher quantities of beer
than fruit
juice
annually.Submitted by 19-0415 on
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