The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.
These tables depict the annual
consumption
per person of both Use synonyms
beer
and Use synonyms
fruit
Use synonyms
juice
in different Use synonyms
countries
. It is clear from the table that Ireland and Canada have the highest annual Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
beer
and Use synonyms
fruit
Use synonyms
juice
respectively.
Use synonyms
According to
what is shown, Ireland and Germany have the highest annual Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
beer
Use synonyms
of
155 and 119 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
liters
respectively. Change the spelling
litres
Although
Austria comes next in order of Linking Words
beer
utilization, the other Use synonyms
countries
consume an average of 90 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
liters
annually with Finland Change the spelling
litres
consumes
the least at 79 Wrong verb form
consuming
Use synonyms
liters
.
Change the spelling
litres
Fruit
Use synonyms
juice
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, Canada and the United States account for Linking Words
a
significant annual Remove the article
apply
consumption
of 52.6 and 42.8 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
liters
respectively, Change the spelling
litres
while
Linking Words
Netherland
and New Zealand consume the least; hovering around 28 and 24 Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
Use synonyms
liters
respectively. The other Change the spelling
litres
countries
have nearly the same Use synonyms
consumption
rate per year of the same beverage.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, we could say that the Linking Words
countries
consume higher quantities of Use synonyms
beer
than Use synonyms
fruit
Use synonyms
juice
annually.Use synonyms
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