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The picture shows the process of making wool. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The given chart illustrates how to manufacture wool. In general, the process has 12 steps, starting with rearing sheep and ending with industrial goods.
Additionally
, it is divided into two main different operations with the purpose of making recycled string and jackets or carpets.
Firstly
, once sheep have enough wool on their bodies, it is sheared and
then
 goes on the step of scouring so that the dirt and dust can be removed. After that, fleece is dried and followed by a stage called carding, when fibres are separated and lie parallel to one another. It is
subsequently
 used to make industrial products, one of which is a string, which can be recycled. For the second purpose, from the fifth stage, woollen tufts are produced and
then
 stored. When having been pinned into balls of yarn, they can be used for knitting or making a number of products
such
 as jackets or carpets.
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