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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many
people
 would believe to choose their friends to accord them
however
 others believe friends of different matchups will be a better choice. I completely agree with the former than the latter view because they have a charismatic bond if alike-minded
people
 form a
friendship
 zone than the different opinions
friendship
 as it creates more difficulties in understanding better. On the one hand, the companionship of identical friends has greater flexibility in sharing any information between them and caring for each other in most situations. As it will
result
 in the bonding being stronger because the point of view for dealing with any circumstances becomes easy for making each other to understand.
For instance
, if both have the same thoughts about shopping or site visiting they will choose a similar place to go to and will enjoy the moments which create the most beautiful memories among them to cherish for a lifetime.I believe
this
 is the way to have a fellowship that gives the happiest feeling.
On the other hand
,
people
 who have formed a
friendship
 zone with different thought processes will
result
 in trust issues.
This
 is because of having conversations with fewer agreements and confrontations between them which
result
 in afraid of sharing information with the other by thinking that the other person would oppose the same.
For example
, if there is any productive work started by one person who gets discouragement by others it actually downs the courage which results in having a negative perception of the one who interrupted which gain has an impact on trust. In conclusion,
although
 having different opinionated partnership
result
 in the motivation of the individuals, I believe having the same mindset
people
 will attain a great deal of
friendship
 to cherish forever.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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