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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Why?

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It is an undeniable fact that the adoption of fossil efficiency is increasing over time in the world.
This
 situation would bring a negative situation to the people and environment, unless renewable
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,
such
 as air and solar resources, are promoted.
However
, the improvement of alternative efficiency would definitely have several merits which will be elaborated on
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 as a source of fuel will protect the world from pollution problems. Unlike fossil
sources
such
 as oil and gas that produce carbon emissions, wind
energy
 has almost no
such
 carbon when the natural power is employed in vehicles or machines, resulting in the world becoming more environmentally friendly.
Therefore
, using
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 to alter fossil intensity would defend the earth against environmental issues.
Furthermore
, another advantage of empowering solar as an
energy
 authority is that the
energy
 can be exploited continuously. Known as the central orbit of the earth, the sun is considered
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an
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 limitless source of
energy
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if people can utilize it as the main source of
energy
, they will be unconcerned about other
sources
 of fuel.
As a result
, inhabitants will be safe from finite
energy
 issues.
Thus
, the use of the sun's power will bring more dominant benefits for people. In conclusion, the increasing use of fossil fuels would negatively impact the environment. To overcome the problem, it becomes vital to use wind and solar
sources
 of
energy
 which can
last
 forever and would have excellent benefits for the environment. It is recommended that the government promote renewable
energy
sources
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • alternative energy sources
  • wind energy
  • solar energy
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • environmental benefits
  • reduction of greenhouse gas emissions
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy
  • energy independence
  • energy security
  • cost challenges
  • infrastructure challenges
  • reliability issues
  • intermittency issues
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