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In many countries, some people earn very high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country. Others believe that the government should not allow people to earn salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, it is inevitable that
economics
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 in
one
country
 has been much affected by the salaries that companies pay
for
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 their worker.
Belief
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of
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in
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 giving high
wages
for
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to
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workers
 is strongly supported by some people but is rejected by
the
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others. It is true that both perspectives have
positive
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a positive
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 and negative
impact
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impacts
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for
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on
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country
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the country
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,
however
, I genuinely believe that limiting
one
’s
salary
 is more positive rather than giving
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salary
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salaries
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for
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workers
. To start with, giving high salaries
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 employees will increase
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productivity in some companies. Paid
by
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above-average
wages
,
workers
 will have more sense of responsibility in their job and societies will highly expect
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their performance.
Consequently
,
this
 heavy-moral burden may force the
workers
 to work more
serious
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seriously
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 and improve their productivity in
one
 company.
Furthermore
,
this
 circumstance will
also
 benefit for
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the country
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 since the higher productivity of
one
 company the higher taxes
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 charge.
On the other hand
, too-high
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salaries
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a worker
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worker
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workers
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 will
also
 lead
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the country
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into
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negative
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the negative
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impact
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impacts
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such
 collapsing of some companies.
It is clear that
 when some
vendors
 pay their
worker
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workers
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with
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high
salary
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salaries
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, there may be
financial
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a financial
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 imbalance between
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the vendor’s
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 income and high
wages
 for employees.
Since
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this
 case, the
collapsing
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 will be an inevitable consequence for several
vendors
.
Thus
, in accordance with
this
 situation,
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the bankruptcy
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 of some
vendors
 might badly impact
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economic stability In my perspective,
instead
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of giving
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high
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a high
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salary
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salaries
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for
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 some
workers
, some of
this
salary
 can be allocated for other purposes.
for instance
,
government
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the government
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 can allocate
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wages
 to take care of beggars or facilitate street children.
With
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this
 way,
government
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the government
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 can reduce famine and cope
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with social
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issue
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issues
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 in
one
country
.
To sum up
,
although
 giving high
wages
 can improve
workers
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workers'
worker's
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 performance, it
also
 has
negative
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a negative
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side
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sides
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such
 as
bankruptcy
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the bankruptcy
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 of some renowned
vendors
.
Moreover
, it should be a limitation of
wages
 to
workers
 and allocate some of the
wages
 for other purposes.
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