many manufactureed food and drink products contain hight levels of suger which causes many health problems. surgary products should be made mpre expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

many food substances are being made from unhealthy

materila

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material

materials

such

as sugar,which is

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responsibility

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of

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many chronic

disease

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.

for instance

,

hypertention

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hypertension

and

diabetic

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. some people

argueed

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that the government should

but

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some regulations on it by increasing its price. in my opinion, I disagree with

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notion,and

i

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will

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to begin

, it is true that

suger

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sugar

can be harmful

although

it is not always the case. because of its capability to increase

suger

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sugar

in the blood level, it can help to

promot

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promote sugar

suger

level

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to the normal range.

for example

, diabetic

patient

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and other

bancrease

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increase

diseases may

causes

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sudenlay

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suddenly

a rapid reduction that can lead to

hypotention

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hypotension

hypertension

and coma ,

while

some juice

contain

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solved

suger

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sugar

is

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easy to metabolise to reach

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the blood

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blood stream

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and return blood level to a normal range.

moreover

,

this

can save the lives of many people

especially

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if sugary products are near them.

furthermore

, if

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sugar

consumed

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in a controlled way ,it can give the human

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a

suden

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enargy

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energy

. a power that can help him in his daily tasks, so it is better than some energy drinks,which have high

caffain

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caffeine

caffein

levels, and it is more dangerous than

suger

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sugar

. for

an

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instant , if a person felt

week

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and needed a substance to pose his energy

suger

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sugar

will be a more

preferd

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preferred

choice from a medical aspect. in

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, it is true that

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sugar

is

hamful

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harmful

and can cause many

disease

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,but it

also

has useful effects.especially, for some

patient

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it can save them

where

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increasing its price will cause a reduction in its

avalibelity

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availability

in the

markets

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.

this

will have a bad effect on some

patint

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patients

which

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may need fast access to it.