The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Both of the maps given depict about two conditions before and after, many of the feature enhancements on the
island
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
,
it is clear that
Linking Words
there have been major improvements on the
island
Use synonyms
. If before
this
Linking Words
island
Use synonyms
there were only coconut trees, after being renovated, many buildings developed. The first one is on the beach, for
now
Add the comma(s)
,now
show examples
we can swim there.
Then
Linking Words
, the most important plural for the ship landing
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
is connected directly to the reception building. So that it will increase the number of tourists who come and make reservations. Restaurants are
also
Linking Words
being built,
of
Correct word choice
and of
show examples
course
Add a comma
,course
show examples
it's easier to find seafood. And the thing that keeps tourists going is the lodging houses. All new buildings are connected by footpaths or driveways. That's great for moving from one site to another. Apart from the addition of features, there is actually no change in the shape and coastline on the
island
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by fikriyatulfalashifah01 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: