The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Both of the maps given depict about two conditions before and after, many of the feature enhancements on the
island
.
Overall
, it is clear that
there have been major improvements on the island
. If before this
island
there were only coconut trees, after being renovated, many buildings developed.
The first one is on the beach, for now
we can swim there. Add the comma(s)
,now
Then
, the most important plural for the ship landing which
is connected directly to the reception building. So that it will increase the number of tourists who come and make reservations. Restaurants are Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
being built, of
Correct word choice
and of
course
it's easier to find seafood. And the thing that keeps tourists going is the lodging houses.
All new buildings are connected by footpaths or driveways. That's great for moving from one site to another. Apart from the addition of features, there is actually no change in the shape and coastline on the Add a comma
,course
island
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