Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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green

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planet

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the home of many types of

animal

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,

plant

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.

That is

why every problem makes our planet's

environment

become worse and worse. So there is nothing that will be strange when we have some debate about environmental

problems

some people say that the main cause of environmental

problems

of our time is the loss of particular

plants

and

animals

while

others argue that there are more important environmental

problems

. To explain their opinions just follow me in the under paragraph. In my opinion, It would be hasty to judge something, but I think these opinions are partly correct because that are 2 reasons, which make the

environment

become worse.

Firstly

, the

environment

would have been destroyed if the pollution had increased day by day. Most of the responsibility belongs to humans which causes many environmental

problems

. Factories and vehicles are the main cause of air pollution because of the industrial emissions they emit like ch4, c3h8, etc. It was and doing attack on the ozone layer of our planet causing global warming that leads to tsunamis, soil erosion, etc.

Secondly

, it will result in some

problems

about economic because natural disasters will drown out many construction, starvation sooner or later it will come.

For

this

reason, environmental issues are really important for us to pay attention

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On the other hand

, the loss of particular species of

plants

and

animals

is a headache issue because they are affected by environmental

problems

like global warming some forests which are many types of

animals

homes burned, water pollution causes their death and poisoned, etc. Many types of

plants

will become extinct. War is one of the thousands of causes of mass extinction of species of

plants

and

animals

. The loss of particular species of

plants

and

animals

will have serious consequences scientific development of humans because the genes of many are very rare. All in all, from my viewpoint environmental issues are a painful problem, today we have been looking for solutions to overcome environmental

problems

. Let each of us individually join hands to contribute to protecting the

environment

to make the world a better day