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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below shows data on the underground railway complexes between six different
cities
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 (London, Paris,
Tokyo
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, Washington DC,
Kyoto
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, and Los Angeles).
Overall
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, the launching year of each city's railroad was in line with the route distance (in kilometres), except in
Kyoto
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, which had a total of 11 km in distance since 1981.
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, the total number of passengers in
Tokyo
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 was massive compared to the other
cities
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. As can be seen, the underground in London was built in 1863, making it the oldest station and longest attempted path between these six
cities
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, followed by Paris,
Tokyo
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, Washington DC,
Kyoto
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, and the newest is in Los Angeles which was launched in 2001.
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 the subway in LA was assumed new, it exceeded nearly 50% of the total route distance in
Kyoto
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. The amount of passengers varies throughout the
cities
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. But
Tokyo
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 was most likely seen to have the largest number of people who had taken the train for the past 136 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, tokyo, kyoto with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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