The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

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Dear Mr John, I hope my letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to a recent repair in my apartment. It has been three years since I am residing in apartment nine in the Waterfall building.

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is the first time the apartment needed to repair.

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, I am grateful for sending the plumber on short notice. As I mentioned earlier, there was a leakage in the pipe of the kitchen sink.

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, the plumber was in a rush

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fixing the specific portion

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his next work schedule.

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, it was working effectively for two days but on the third-day water started to flow over the floor. From my perspective, I believe if you replace the pipe with a new one it would be great.

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, you do not need to take the hustle to fix it repeatedly. Better to mention that my uncle has a wholesale business where he sells different types of pipes. If you want, I can talk with him, and he can provide you with a discount. It has been known that I am a working lady, so it is difficult for me to do extra household chores. I am looking forward to a quick response from your side. Yours Sincerely, Lisa

Alma IslamFri Feb 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

225 words

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