The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists, governments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently automobile has become the most used mode of transportation.

Beside

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the positive

impact

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people enjoy from the car, it contributes

in

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worsening the environmental status

as well as

threatening pedestrians and motorcycle users. In order to lower our dependency on

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automobile uses, I

supports

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the initiative of governments to lay down crucial measurements on

this

issue by increasing the

tax

related to automobile and improving public transport. It is strongly believed that

increasing

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number of both private and public

cars

, including buses, in the streets poses some environmental effects and dangers for pedestrians and motorists. Fumes and

emission

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emissions

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produced by

cars

dramatically lower the quality of air in the cities and

then

may harm the health quality of dwellers.

Moreover

, the bad manners of car drivers

poses

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some accidents

to

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pedestrians and motorcycle users. To tackle

these problem

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,

government

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the government

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should make

measurements

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toward

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against

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using

cars

in the city. One of them is by rising the

tax

because it is believed that the low

tax

as

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promotes the purchasing of private

cars

.

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the other hand,

government

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the government

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should enhance the facilities and management of public transportation. Some workers opt to ride their own

cars

because of

lack

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the lack

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of public

transportations

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transportation

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. If governments well managed to improve the public

transports

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transport

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by adding the quantities of modes and variating them,

as well as

improving their facilities, the dwellers would choose them. As

results

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, the problems can be reduced effectively. In conclusion, I strongly believed that initiatives

taken

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by

government

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the government

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to reduce the growing number of private

cars

by increasing the

tax

and enhancing the quality of mass

transportations

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transportation

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, so that

citizen

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citizens

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prioritize

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using them

instead

of their own

cars

.