Although the prices of fossil fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in these fuel prices are the only way to reduce the world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fossil fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement?
As many
people
sustain, ulteriorly rising the cost of fossil fuels may be the only solution to decrease their consumption and to higher their preservation even when prices
have already known a huge growth during the past twenty years. While
I will continue to discuss these topic
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in the next few paragraphs It seems to me that an additional increase in fuel prices
may not be the most efficient resolution.
Although
if we were to follow the law of supply and demand it would be certain to state that a rise in prices
of something diminishes its demand and so its consumption and consequently
lessen the pressure on its offer, it is also
true that since fossil fuels are primary goods for the world economy this
law may not apply as usual. In fact, people
are continuing to question the efficiency of the resolution proposed after all these years. Considering the fact that lots of people
are still able to afford this
resource even in cases when the prices
are already incredibly high it means that its cost is not a variable that is
taken into consideration into
one’s market choices. Change preposition
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Therefore
I feel like different kind
of ways may be necessary in order to discourage citizens from using Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
this
energy source.
To conclude
, I think it is a positive trend that more and more people
are hard looking for solutions in order to stop or at least minimize the negative effects that the exasperate wasting
of resources brings to the planet, but I do firmly believe that arguing that increasing world fuel Replace the word
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prices
is be
the only and most effective solution that can be found is arguably Change the verb form
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hazard and I completely disagree.Change the article
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion