Although the prices of fossil fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in these fuel prices are the only way to reduce the world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fossil fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement?
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prices
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in the next few paragraphs It seems to me that an additional increase in fuel Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion