We should fix the traffic and transportation by making everyone lives in the cities not suburbs or countrysides. What to extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we are experiencing

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and

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problems

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. It is been argued that these issues are able to

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solve

by letting everyone live in the cities rather than the countryside or the rural areas. I disagree with

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statement, which will be later discussed in the essay. It is true that

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traffic

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and

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are now high-priority issues these days but the reason

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is not that many

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live in rural areas or the countryside. The potential cause of

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and

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matters is the increasing number of private car owners and the poor quality of public

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. To illustrate, the poor quality of public

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significantly

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people

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to daily use it.

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, they afford their own vehicles to be able to travel more conveniently and easily, resulting in the increasing number of private

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travelling on roads, which causes

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congestion.

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, encouraging

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to live in the cities will aggravate the

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. Take Bangkok, my hometown, as an example; More and more

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have moved

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Bangkok for decades

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the civilisation and work opportunities which might not be provided by their hometown, leading the

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and

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problems

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in Bangkok to become even worse. The reason is that there is an inadequate public

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service

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all residents,

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people

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opt to own their own automobiles

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,

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, the congestion problem is getting worse. I,

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, totally disagree with the statement.

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, I disagree with the statement since by only making everyone live in the cities rather than in the suburbs or countryside, the

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and

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matters can not be fixed. The main key to resolving these

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is that the government needs to improve and enhance the quality of public

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so that the residents will be encouraged to use it, resulting in which

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traffic

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congestion will be ameliorated.