do you agree or disagree that people in today's world have become too dependent with the e-commerce such as online shopping. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In
this
contemporary world, we can get whatever we want within a fraction of
seconds
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through
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online. Nowadays, most people
considering
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that
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apply
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online shopping
is
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as
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one of the convenient
way
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to buy their needs. I completely agree with
this
statement.
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