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Nowadays more and more people are buying products and services on credit. Is it good or bad for the society?

#people #products #services #credit #society
Recently, the issue
has
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 been brought
some
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into focus is there are a significant number of people purchasing goods and services
access
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 to
credit
. People believe that buying on
credit
 is the norm in many parts of the world. In my opinion, I consider the disadvantages
outweigh
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 the advantages. In
this
 essay, I will outline the reason why buying on
credit
 is not a good choice. One thing
that is
 of great significance is that purchases are bought on
credit
 often taken for granted these days. There are many
reason
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 for the drawback of the availability of easy
credit
. For one thing, it
lead
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 to
the
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increasing
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of
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in
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 personal debt in modern life. For another,
customer’s
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the customer’s
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 life will be in turmoil. The most familiar example of
this
 is customers who have to pay
cost
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the cost
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for
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 the high standard of living
in addition
 to
pay
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 for another
installment
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. Indeed, adults should learn how to make financial decisions and spend money in a reasonable way. It seems quite clear that buying on
credit
 will increase
the
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personal debt and become the consequences can be severe. It is
also
 well known that
installment
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 can lead to
the
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 lack of money to spend on other necessities. The immediate result it produces is
the
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decreasing
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of
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in
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 household expenditure and disposable income. Young adults,
for example
, in the payment term have to pay for the products which buy on
credit
, they will not have enough money to purchase the good things that they need. It
make
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 no difference that customers have to model sensible purchasing behaviour and have the ability to maintain a balance between income and expenditure. In summary, it is important that it is worthwhile taking steps to ensure people are as well-informed as possible in order to maintain a stable life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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