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Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The world map
illustrate
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 the percentage of
the
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people willing to eat
insects
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 products, and the bar chart below illustrates the price of the varieties of
insects
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insect
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food
 and
the
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meat. As per the
map
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the
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we could see Mexico, Peru,Brazil,
CHina
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China
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,
Thailand
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and Thailand
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 has the
hight
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high
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 percentage of
willigness
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willingness
 to eat
insects
 foods.
The other
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Other
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 countries
such
 as
USA
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the USA
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,
Rusia
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Russia
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,Australia,
UK
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the UK
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,Spain,India,
Africa
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and Africa
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 are countries that are still in the average percentage of willingness to eat
insects
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food
. The graph below indicates the price range of different varieties of
insects
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insect
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food
 and meat in USD
for
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per kg.As per the
graph
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 we could clearly see there is a high demand of price for
insects
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food
 compared to
the
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meat items, and rice. When comparing the map, and the graph we could clearly observe even though the prices are more for
insects
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food
 the
percent
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per cent
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 of people willing to eat insect
food
 is relatively high.
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