The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country #summarise #information #selectiong #features #comparisons
The given line graphs compare electrical tools
ownerships
and usage of them per Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
households
in Fix the agreement mistake
household
given
period started from 1920 to 2019.
It can be clearly seen that the weekly time consumed on Correct article usage
a given
Use synonyms
houseworks
decreased dramatically Correct your spelling
housework
while
keeping Linking Words
the
electronic items has shown Correct article usage
apply
rise
Add an article
a rise
the rise
of
popularity.
In 1920, Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
houseworks
Correct your spelling
housework
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
spent
Add a missing verb
was spent
on
a week accounted for 50 Change preposition
in
hours
. Use synonyms
At
the same year, nobody did Change preposition
In
not
have a refrigerator but Rewrite the sentence
apply
washing
machine was commonly used by 40 % of households. From 1920 to 1980, individuals spent less time year to year in Correct article usage
a washing
Use synonyms
houseworks
, Correct your spelling
housework
this
trend was significantly reduced from 50 to 20 Linking Words
hours
. For the same period, refrigerator usage Use synonyms
has
increased sharply, which means Unnecessary verb
apply
resulted
all of the houses have their own freezer by 1980.
Between 1980 to 2019, Add the preposition
inresulted
fromresulted
hours
Use synonyms
consumption
in Replace the word
consumed
Use synonyms
houseworks
slightly decreased to 10 Correct your spelling
housework
hours
per week. Indeed, Use synonyms
vacum
cleaner has reached Correct your spelling
vacuum
its
maximum Correct pronoun usage
their
of
potential by 100 % proportion of Change preposition
apply
house
using Correct article usage
the house
it
. At the same time, washing machine ownership saw a moderate upward trend from 65 % of house Correct pronoun usage
them
ownerships
to just around Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
three quarters
of it.Add a hyphen
three-quarters
Submitted by aeksia on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words houseworks, hours with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼