Many countries use fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) as the main source of energy. However, in some countries the use of the alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) is encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this development?

In the current contemporary era to make a machine work basic requirement is
energy
and the source can be a by-product of either fossil
fuels
or natural sources. Recently people argue about the usage of fossil
fuels
that is
affecting the environment badly and leading the world to globalization
also
, other countries are trying to overcome these issues by replacing them with alternatives like solar
energy
. I strongly believe that we need to encourage alternative sources of
energy
instead
of using fossil
fuels
.
Firstly
,
due to
the allowance of extracting the
fuels
in order to generate the
energy
. Most influential people are destroying the landscape of the country.
For instance
, a district named Bellary which resides in Karnataka was earlier the most magnificent natural landscape where it has been turned down into a mining area causing the surrounding area to be polluted environmentally and even for the drinking water. The wastage from the mining area getting mixed with underground water results in inappropriate drinking leaving no choice for people to drink the same and the results in affecting their health.
This
needs to be handled cautiously by the government body by following strict rules.
Secondly
,
due to
the demand created by the public like the usage of more
automobiles
in the rural areas, ships used for the import and export of goods and international and domestic airlines are the main consumers of these fossil
fuels
To overcome
this
as experiment countries like India came up by introducing EV
automobiles
in the market which tremendously decreased the air pollution issues.
For example
, a decade ago there was no concept of using EV
automobiles
in India. But now the government advertised and encouraged the public to purchase EV
automobiles
which use electricity as an alternative fuel.
This
leads to a great impact on improvising the environment of metro cities by reducing air pollution. To summarize,
although
using fossil
fuels
as a source of
energy
either for transportation or for any other
usage
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might be the best way but weighing its advantages over disadvantages is less and we should definitely encourage countries to find other sources to produce
energy
.
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  • sustainable
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • carbon footprint
  • greenhouse gases
  • energy independence
  • climate change
  • environmental impact
  • infrastructural development
  • technological innovation
  • economic disruption
  • fossil fuel depletion
  • energy transition
  • consistency and reliability
  • wildlife habitat
  • natural landscapes
  • solar panels
  • wind turbines
  • energy consumption
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