Surveillance cameras in bank, offices, shops and streets have been very successful in reducing crime in the work place and in public, but they are also a tool for their users to spy on people’s private business. What problems do the use of Surveillance cameras create? Are there any solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

Due to

the increase in the

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people discovered the surveillance cameras . After using them the

crime

rates are drastically reduced in both workplace and

also

in public . In counterpart,part there are

also

significant problems with it. They create disturbances and I will be discussing the examples and providing you with some solutions with my knowledge. Security cameras have been put in place in various places where crimes

such

as theft could occur. These places may include automated teller machines (ATMs), banks, shops, etc. As the years have progressed, they have been placed in schools and offices to monitor students and employees respectively.

Nevertheless

,

this

action created more problems as people have begun demanding their right to privacy.

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essay will delve into the problems caused by these gadgets

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the solutions to them. First of all, after installing cameras in the workplace or organisation It can be monitored by some person and if that individual has some interest in

one's

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, there is a possibility that he can spy on her/him. The usage of the I have witnessed an incident where one of my

colleague

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has been gone with an illegal

crime

with the misusage of the data collected from the ATM Stall.The video has been leaked by that surveillance employee to a roadside gang ,they

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lump amount of money to that employee and he instantly gave the data to them. They morphed the picture of her to some adult content sites. After seeing

this

she could not digest it and she committed suicide. I feel there can be

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solution to irradicate

this

kind of

crime

in society. As per my ,

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we can upgrade with several encryption methods to protect the data with much more security. And

also

we can develop software where there is no requirement for employees to monitor the surveillance.