Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?
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environment
. The topic will be elaborated and a particular opinion will be provided.
Undoubtedly, environmental damage is supposed to be
a crucial today`s Unnecessary verb
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problem
, because a lot of pollution
can be seen in most countries
. For instance
, air pollution
, water pollution
, soil erosion and the like, all those features are harmful for
our Change the preposition
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environment
. Nevertheless
, there are solutions for
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this
problem
. I reckon that governments should take responsibility and officials should cancel Add an article
the permit
permit
for factories which pollute the Fix the agreement mistake
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environmental
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For instance
, The Netherlands' government
has issued a new regulation saying that factories which damage our environment
should be closed and factories producing toxic gas was closed. Nowadays, Holland is by far the cleanest country in the
Europe.
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On the other hand
, environmental pollution
is not one problem
. Deforestation
is supposed to be one of the major problems in most countries
. Deforestation
wipes out local animals, such
as owls, rabbits and volves
. The Correct your spelling
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government
should fix it,
because Remove the comma
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deforestation
has a harmful impact not only on our environment
but on our health. If the government
adds some regulation
about Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
deforestation
, we will save animals living in the forests. Hence
, we will less damage local
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environment
. For example
, Germany used to have deforestation
, Nonetheless
, the government
of Germany managed to fix it. was able to fix this
issue/problem
To sum up
, I strongly believe that a lot of countries
have a big problem
with the environment
and I wish the government
would fix it, as soon as possible, like
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countries
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