Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?

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In today`s contemporary world, we are living in
the
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capitalist time, where one of the most popular issues is the
environment
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. The topic will be elaborated and a particular opinion will be provided. Undoubtedly, environmental damage is supposed to
be
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a crucial today`s
problem
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, because a lot of
pollution
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can be seen in most
countries
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.
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, air
pollution
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, water
pollution
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, soil erosion and the like, all those features are harmful
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our
environment
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.
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, there are solutions
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this
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problem
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. I reckon that governments should take responsibility and officials should cancel
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permit
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for factories which pollute the
environmental
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.
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, The Netherlands'
government
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has issued a new regulation saying that factories which damage our
environment
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should be closed and factories producing toxic gas was closed. Nowadays, Holland is by far the cleanest country in
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Europe.
On the other hand
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, environmental
pollution
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is not one
problem
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.
Deforestation
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is supposed to be one of the major problems in most
countries
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.
Deforestation
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wipes out local animals,
such
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as owls, rabbits and
volves
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voles
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. The
government
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should fix it
,
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because
deforestation
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has a harmful impact not only on our
environment
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but on our health. If the
government
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adds some
regulation
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regulations
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about
deforestation
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, we will save animals living in the forests.
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, we will less damage
local
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the local
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environment
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.
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, Germany used to have
deforestation
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,
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, the
government
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of Germany managed to fix it. was able to fix
this
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issue/
problem
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To sum up
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, I strongly believe that a lot of
countries
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have a big
problem
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with the
environment
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and I wish the
government
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would fix it, as soon as possible,
like
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the above
countries
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have done.
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