Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?

In today`s contemporary world, we are living in
the
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capitalist time, where one of the most popular issues is the
environment
. The topic will be elaborated and a particular opinion will be provided. Undoubtedly, environmental damage is supposed to
be
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a crucial today`s
problem
, because a lot of
pollution
can be seen in most
countries
.
For instance
, air
pollution
, water
pollution
, soil erosion and the like, all those features are harmful
for
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our
environment
.
Nevertheless
, there are solutions
for
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this
problem
. I reckon that governments should take responsibility and officials should cancel
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permit
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for factories which pollute the
environmental
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.
For instance
, The Netherlands'
government
has issued a new regulation saying that factories which damage our
environment
should be closed and factories producing toxic gas was closed. Nowadays, Holland is by far the cleanest country in
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Europe.
On the other hand
, environmental
pollution
is not one
problem
.
Deforestation
is supposed to be one of the major problems in most
countries
.
Deforestation
wipes out local animals,
such
as owls, rabbits and
volves
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voles
evolves
. The
government
should fix it
,
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because
deforestation
has a harmful impact not only on our
environment
but on our health. If the
government
adds some
regulation
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about
deforestation
, we will save animals living in the forests.
Hence
, we will less damage
local
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environment
.
For example
, Germany used to have
deforestation
,
Nonetheless
, the
government
of Germany managed to fix it. was able to fix
this
issue/
problem
To sum up
, I strongly believe that a lot of
countries
have a big
problem
with the
environment
and I wish the
government
would fix it, as soon as possible,
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the above
countries
have done.
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