The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide the differences between the population in Australia who were originally born there and outside the country that living in certain environments,
such
as cities, towns, and rural areas in two respective years, 1995 and 2010. At a glance, each year most of the individuals from both groups spend their
life
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in the main
center
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reaching more than a half proportion of the country between 1995 and 2010.
Firstly
, approximately 50% of citizens birthed in Australia resided in the capital cities followed by the country (30%), and towns (20%).
While
, the other group showed the same rank, with 60% of the people living in the metropolitan zone in 1995.
Secondly
, about a decade and a half later society that was born in Australia who decided to dwell in the urban areas increased to over 60% and the other group
also
experienced 20% growth and reached 80% in total.
On the other hand
, residents in the metropolitan and non-metropolitan areas dipped
nearly
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1/5 respectively for both clusters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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