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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it the clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, masses around the globe are residing in a
world
 heavily influenced by technology.
Although
 I agree that
internet
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 plies significant comforts to
people
, I believe that the discomforts arising in the form of less control and endangered safety of information are outbalancing the advantages. On the
one
 hand,
internet
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 has proven to be fruitful for
people
 around the
world
.
Internet
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 has transmuted the
lives
 of
people
 to a great extent since the dawn of the twenty-first century. It has brought changes in the social, cultural, economic and political spheres of life. If
one
 traces back time to the
last
 century,
one
 would be able to see the considerable differences in the
lives
 of
people
 living in that era. In
this
 way,
internet
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 has given
people
's dreams a reality. You can see
this
 with globalisation,
people
 are more connected today than they ever have been in the history of mankind.
Moreover
,
internet
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 has transformed the whole
world
 into a global village.
Therefore
,
internet
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 has turned out to be productive for the masses residing in different regions of the
world
.
On the other hand
, in spite of the benefits of
internet
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, it has given birth to some problems relating to
privacy
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 of information and control of user's data.
Although
people
 love to share their private life on social media platforms like Instagram, Facebook, and WhatsApp, they are unaware of the wickedness of
internet
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. Some evil-minded
people
 having malicious intentions try to hack the users' data and intrude into their personal
lives
 for their own self-interest.
People
 are being deluded
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 the concept of privacy offered to them by
internet
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. As a matter of fact,
people
's data is becoming more vulnerable day by day.
For instance
, as explained in
one
 documentary named "The Social Dilemma" on Netflix,
people
's likes and dislikes of some particular content on websites like YouTube and Facebook are heinously used against them by
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developers. In
this
 way,
people
 are unconsciously trapped in
this
 maze.
Therefore
,
internet
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 has arisen some serious problems for
people
. In a nutshell, since I agreed that
internet
 provides great benefits to
people
 in every dimension of their everyday
lives
, I reckoned that problems arising
due to
internet
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 somehow outweigh the comforts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global connectivity
  • digital banking
  • cybersecurity
  • data protection
  • security breaches
  • cyber attacks
  • online transactions
  • digital divide
  • surveillance
  • freedom of information
  • responsible usage
  • ethical considerations
  • digital footprints
  • online behavior
  • information inequality
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