The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given pie charts represent exports between two countries(the United States and
Vietnam
) and different areas of exportation
products
and their values in millions of dollars
.
Overall
, the most valuable product of
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Vietnam
exporting to the US is Coffee and the cheapest exportations are garments and other staffs
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staff
In contrast
to Vietnam
, US
exporting lots of industrial Correct article usage
the US
products
such
as machinery, cars and different products
but the most expensive exporting units are aircraft parts with 72 million
of
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dollars
in value. Surprisingly the lowest income providing
by exports is cars with 6 Wrong verb form
provided
million
of their value.
If we scope much deeper to Vietnam
to US exportation
, the second important exportation
products
of Vietnam
are Fruit and vegetables with 16 million
of
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dollars
. On the other hand
, seafood and rice are pretty close to each other with 4.4 millons
and 4.3 Correct your spelling
million
millions
millions
respectively. Back to the US and their Change to singular
million
exportation
to Vietnam
, there are products
which are uncategorized with valued
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a valued
35
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at 35
million
of
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dollars
.Also
over 30 Add a comma
,Also
million
of
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dollars
are earned by
machinery sales. Fertiliser and cotton are Change preposition
from
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different exportation
areas with 16.5 million
and 12 million
of
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dollars
by order.Submitted by historicalpen on
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