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Growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or countryside?

#population #countries #government #homes #cities #countryside
Population
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The population
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 is increasing day by day. Cities are being crowded. It has now become a common feature to get stuck in traffic for 2 to 3 hours. One family on average includes 2 to 3 children. These children when grew up
starts
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 living in the same house with their families.
This
 has given rise to
joint
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a joint
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 family
system
.
Due to
current
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the current
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 economic situation,
shared
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a shared
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system
 has become very common in Pakistan. Living in
joint
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a joint
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system
 has its own pros and cons. Out of many advantages one is shared bills, grocery and other
utility related
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utility-related
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 things,
relieves
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which relieves
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 some of the stress.
However
,
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the iInvasion
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iInvasion
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invasion
 of privacy,
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and less
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 space are some of the factors that can sometimes frustrate the members of the household and can lead to quarrels. All these things are bad for
mental
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the mental
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 health of both kids and adults but, people are bound to live together because of financial constraints. No doubt,
the
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inflation has caused many families to live in
shared
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a shared
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system
. Government should take
actions
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 in
this
 time of need. Cities are out of
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 as they are already densely populated.
Administration
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The administration
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 should build housing societies that are economical
in
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on
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the country
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country side
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countryside
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. They should take
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the initiatives
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initiatives
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 to introduce apartment culture in the country. Apartments can be a good option for small families, wanting to live separately and independently. On one
hand
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this
 step will not only encourage people to come and live in
countryside
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the countryside
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 but
it
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will
also
 give a chance to businesses and office sectors of rural areas to grow and flourish.
Growing
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A growing
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 population is a big problem in developing countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or
countryside
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the countryside
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?
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