The death penalty should be available as a punishment for serious crimes. To what extent do you agree?
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people
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criminals
live in a poverty for the rest of their Use synonyms
life
is the best solution.
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, in some Use synonyms
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, the amount of Use synonyms
this
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people
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punishment
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Criminals
still have the Use synonyms
right
to live, paying back to the country for what they have done.
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must have a serious Use synonyms
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. The motif should be the prior basis to decide the most effective Use synonyms
punishment
. So to give them poverty lives is the answer for it. In fact, there is a lot of Indonesian Use synonyms
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also
pay the officer that makes them have a normal Linking Words
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case seems so normal in Indonesia. Linking Words
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, it will be so different if the country takes all of their assets, Linking Words
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this
condition will make the corruptors cannot pay for the judge, so justice will arise.
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right
. The Fix the agreement mistake
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criminals
should have a Use synonyms
punishment
behind bars and all of their assets will beUse synonyms
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