Serious crime can bring negative effects on others, it makes some
people
believe that the
death
sentence is the answer to reduce it. Yet I don't agree with that statement, because it is against human
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. I do believe to make
criminals
live in a poverty for the rest of their
life
is the best solution.
There is no end to the criminal doing their actions alongside our
life
, in some
it gets more and more serious. These actions can make other
people
have lost their precious things,
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it can lead to the
death
of the victim.
For
the corruptors, take money from the
people
on the ground
due to
fulfilling their ego.
Although
the government has given aid to the
people
, the amount of
this
aid can be reduced by the corruptor. It brings many
people
who live in poverty who cannot buy their needs, pay their education tuition or pay their health bills.
Furthermore
, it can lead to suicide
due to
people
's economic conditions being unfulfilled. Even though serious crimes
such
as corruption is unforgiven, there is no
right
to give
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sentence to them as a
punishment
.
Criminals
still have the
right
to live, paying back to the country for what they have done.
However
, the
criminals
must have a serious
punishment
, giving undirectly warning to others not to do the same case. If we look back at the motif of corruptors, the motif will be for wealth
life
. The motif should be the prior basis to decide the most effective
punishment
. So to give them poverty lives is the answer for it. In fact, there is a lot of Indonesian
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who can pay the judge to make injustice decisions, and
also
pay the officer that makes them have a normal
life
behind bars. They can do that because they still have a lot of money, spending some of it to have a benefit
punishment
.
This
case seems so normal in Indonesia.
However
, it will be so different if the country takes all of their assets,
such
as business, property, and cars.
Furthermore
,
this
condition will make the corruptors cannot pay for the judge, so justice will arise.
In conclusion, the
death
penalty is not the answer for
people
who have done serious crimes because it
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human
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. The
criminals
should have a
punishment
behind bars and all of their assets will be
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.