Nowadays most big cities have high congestion and rood traffic issues. What are the real causes for this? Suggest a solution that will help to relieve it.

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Nowadays many
people
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come acroNowadays
traffic
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jam
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is a big problem, mostly everywhere. Why it became
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a big problem? In
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I’ll express my point of view about the reason for
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jams
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and I’ll give my idea of how to
decrease
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traffic
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jams
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, I want to say that the first major vehicle
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jam
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occurred in Washington State in 1969. The reason for
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was a rock festival called "Woodstock", very popular at that
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among young
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,
as well as
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middle-aged
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. More than 500 000 car owners lined up in a 32-kilometre line on the way to the concert. So far, no
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big
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jams
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have been recorded. In my ,opinion the reason for
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traffic
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jam
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was that there was a concert “Woodstock”, as I said it was very popular at that
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among young
people
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,
as well as
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middle-aged
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, so it was obvious that there will be
traffic
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. But nowadays there are no
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reasons, like famous concerts. In our
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, famous concert is replaced by
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job
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. A large crowd of
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has office jobs, so they have to drive to a
job
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, and the
job
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start
time
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is mostly the same, so the cars are in peak hour and they are in most cases late for a
job
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. So, I want to give an idea of how to
decrease
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traffic
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jams
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. As I said before
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of the main reasons for peak hours is that the
job
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start
time
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is in most cases the same, so I want to say that if we want to
decrease
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traffic
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jams
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, we have to change
work
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time
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, for ,example if 100
people
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job
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is starting in 6:00 they will be in peak hour, so if we put 33
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to
work
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at 6:00 and other 33 in 6:30 and other in 7:00 we’ll
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traffic
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jam
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, but it doesn’t mean that
one
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type of
people
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will
work
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7 hours but another 6, It means that
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sort of
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will start at 6:00 and finish
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at 18:00, and second sort of
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will start
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at 7:00 and finish at 19:00, so no
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will not be in the red.
At the end
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I want to say that if you are boss and you want that your workers will not be late, just change their
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time
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.ss with hte issues of road
traffic
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and with high congestions
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