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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed ,rather than work for a company. Why this might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

With the changing culture and market shift many people prefer being self-employed
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 working for an employer.
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 will discuss why people don’t prefer working for organizations and will
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, delve into the disadvantages of being self-employed. First of all, to afford their lifestyle and
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 their wishes individuals prefer to have multiple sources of income which helps them feel contained and
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, a close friend of mine, who travels around the world and works as a freelancer makes more money than me( a salaried employee).
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 in impromptu lay-offs and bad
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 humans prefer not to
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 for firms as there will be constant job insecurity and stress. Despite the obvious reasons, being self-employed has multiple challenges associated
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, there is no fixed routine to be followed by an individual which results in an increase in obesity and no or less social life for
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, many freelancers end up working all day and night to deliver a project or at times they have no
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 meet many
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 their
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 choices.
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, there is no fixed income when someone is working on their own and running their own business which results in uncertainty in life.
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 one can make good money and lead
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 as per their conditions if they are self-employed
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 in problems like social anxiety and obesity.
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, one should choose wisely about their end goal and take a step.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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