The tourism industry has grown enourmously in the last fifty years, and there are few places that are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefit the countries which tourists visit. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The

tourism

industry has experienced a considerable increase in popularity over the

last

fifty years. Resulting in almost no places that would not be influenced by

touristic

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activity. Some people claim that

tourism

does not bring many advantages to these visited places.

However

, I disagree and

hence

, in

this

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I will argue that

tourism

enhances a country’s economic

situations

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and helps with acquiring new languages.

Tourism

creates opportunities for locals to set up profitable

buisnesses

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businesses

. There is a variety of services that can be offered to

tourists

such

as hotels, restaurants or tour guides. Given that

such

buisnesses

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businesses

does

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not usually require a high qualification or years of education,

it

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can be especially beneficial for

the

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poorer citizens.

Hence

, the potential

in

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reduction of wealth inequality can

imporve

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improve

overall

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state of an economy.

For example

, Greece which is

a

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highly dependent on

tourism

has experienced

a serious economic problems

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serious economic problems

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with the COVID-19 pandemic that froze the

tourism

industry. The benefit of

tourism

also

lies in the cultural enrichment between

tourists

and locals. As

tourist

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rarely speak the language of the country they visit, natives have to learn several words of the language

tourists

speak in order to provide their services even though they might be reluctant to

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.

This

can be the first step in learning

new

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language, which can

then

open door to new opportunities.

For example

, once a street market seller

learnes

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learners

learned

learns

to communicate with

tourist

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, he can be more successful in his selling. In conclusion, not only that

tourism

can help a country with its citizens’ wealth it

also

encourage

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them to learn new languages, which can lead to

further

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development of the country.

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am

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firmly

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that countries should welcome

tourists

as they can be a source of

a

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great both

tangable

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tangible

and

intangable

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intangible

wealth.