The tourism industry has grown enourmously in the last fifty years, and there are few places that are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefit the countries which tourists visit. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The
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industry has experienced a considerable increase in popularity over the
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fifty years. Resulting in almost no places that would not be influenced by
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activity. Some people claim that
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does not bring many advantages to these visited places.
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, I disagree and
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I will argue that
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enhances a country’s economic
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and helps with acquiring new languages.
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creates opportunities for locals to set up profitable
buisnesses
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businesses
. There is a variety of services that can be offered to
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such
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as hotels, restaurants or tour guides. Given that
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not usually require a high qualification or years of education,
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can be especially beneficial for
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poorer citizens.
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, the potential
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reduction of wealth inequality can
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improve
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overall
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the overall
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state of an economy.
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, Greece which is
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highly dependent on
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has experienced
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with the COVID-19 pandemic that froze the
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industry. The benefit of
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lies in the cultural enrichment between
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and locals. As
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rarely speak the language of the country they visit, natives have to learn several words of the language
tourists
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speak in order to provide their services even though they might be reluctant to
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.
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can be the first step in learning
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language, which can
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open door to new opportunities.
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, once a street market seller
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learners
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, he can be more successful in his selling. In conclusion, not only that
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can help a country with its citizens’ wealth it
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encourage
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them to learn new languages, which can lead to
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further
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development of the country.
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firmly
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that countries should welcome
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as they can be a source of
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great both
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tangible
and
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intangible
wealth.
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