The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of three types of nutrients (
sodium
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, saturated fat and added sugar) which can be harmful if consumed supremely
much
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in various meals.
Overall
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,
sodium
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and soggy fat are consumed heavily at Dinner
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snacks involve almost half of the added sugar as compared to other meals.
On the other hand
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, Breakfast incorporates the least amount of these three nutrients. In terms of
sodium
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and soaked, fats both are taken in extremely high percentages in dinner (43% and 37% respectively) followed by lunch
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slightly under one-third of these substances compared to alternative meal categories.
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breakfast adds only 14% of
sodium
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and 16% waterlogged fats.
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data Snacks has a seemingly immensely large quantity of added sugar with a figure of 42%. Followed by dinner which involves 23% of carbohydrates. The new two types of food combined have around one-third of the sweet.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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