computer games have negative effects on children's health and socializing,some argue that there are positives about playing computer games . discuss negatives and positives.

Computer

games

have been a trend for 21 -the first generations , nowadays , no single home in the world has not played

video

games

or even played with their friends on

computer

networks , but the thing that

this

had a detrimental effect on the player. Some people fear the consequences on

children

‘s health, and their social skills, despite the joy and feeling of accomplishment that accompanies these

games

, I will discuss these effects in the essay , and why

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do have concerns about these playing

games

and

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feel that they should be carefully monitored . Gaming could be harmful to

children

’s health, and

although

gaming appears to be innocent , it is accompanied by dangerous health issues .

While

, obesity is increasing in society,and weight gain is spreading among youngsters ,particularly

children

playing excessive time

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computer

games

,Indeed,

video

games

are associated with less movement and some people have had signs of muscular atrophy

besides

general

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weaknesses

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such

as eyesight problems , and hearing issues . Another serious issue with

computer

games

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is that

video

players lose social interaction with others , eventually leading to detachment from reality , in some cases recorded,

children

heard hallucinations

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and

eventually

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diagnosed with autism.

However

, despite all

this

, actually playing

video

games

is fun and some scientists suggest that some

children

play

computer

games

for developing mental and cognitive skills ,

for example

, some learn maths and counting in a beautiful

video

game and assisted virtual reality .

In other words

, there are supporters of

this

game despite all the bad side effects . In conclusion, there should be an observation for these activities to ensure that no harm in these

games

,

while

those which proved to profit the

children

should be encouraged and supervised by their parents .