The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.
The line graph illustrates the
probabilityof
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Australian
exports
of
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4 countries
in
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between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that Japan and India decreased
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Australian
exports
over the period. In General, China and India experienced upsurged percentage of Australian
exports
, starting the export in 1990 and
ended
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up in 2012.
Whereas
Japan and US
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declined around
in
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2012.
This
is how China became one of the
most
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top
country
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to export
in
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Australia. At the beginning of the year
in
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1990, the
amount
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of
exports
of
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china climbed significantly faster within 25 years as compared to Japan which fluctuated slightly by every 5 years and dropped in 2012. With regards to the percentage of
exports
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US began
with
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11 in 1990 and decreased until 1995
then
suddenly peaked again at around 11 in 2000 and
at
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the
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2010 it fell gradually.
On the other hand
,
india
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India
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was stable from 1990 to 2000 and rise gradually
at the end
of the year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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