Some countries show criminal trials publicly on the Tv. Is there more advantages or disadvantages to this?

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Certain nations

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broadcast the hearings of

law breakers

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openly on national television. The rate of criminal issues of late

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have

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increased rapidly over the

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few years.

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act, most countries have adopted the strategy of showing the

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of these offenders openly in our media.

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, some people have the view that

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action is of great merits, whiles others

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believe that the drawbacks

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the cons.

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on the advantages of

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trial.

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, criminals are

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openly to serve as

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deterrent

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to the general public. Punishments meted out to them,

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as a warning to

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, a prison sentence that was given to a notorious criminal in Ghana

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made the youth that

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also

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involved in

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action repent. Imagine if

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punishment was given out privately, how will the others change?

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is done for the sake of free and transparent judgement.

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lawsuit

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Mr.

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A, for stealing a pen, must be

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for

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B for stealing the same pen. As we all know, we live in a world full of bribery and corruption

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the rich might always find their way out of

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hearing is done in secret. Meanwhile, the poor

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inability to pay

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way out

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will end up facing punishment. In conclusion, with all these merits

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out, I believe that open trial is the best

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in terms

of transparency and deterrent to citizens.

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Some countries show criminal trials publicly on the Tv. Is there more advantages or disadvantages to this?

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